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Rondel

A rondel is similar to the rondeau poem. The first and second lines are repeated later in the poem — once in the middle, and again at the end. Sometimes, only the first line is repeated at the end instead of both.

The usual rhyme scheme is ABba abAB abbaA(B). The rondel’s rhythm and repetition give it a smooth, musical quality, making it great for storytelling or capturing a simple, happy moment.

Example

Carousel Ride

Painted ponies go round and round (rhyme: A)
on a carousel at the county fair. (B)
A mom lifts her young son high into the air, (b)
then sits him on the saddle of a pony he has found. (a)

The air's redolent with popcorn, and calliope sound. (a)
Bridles glisten green and gold; lacquered faces smile and stare. (b)
Painted ponies go round and round, (A) - repeated
on a carousel at the county fair. (B) - repeated

Child marvels that his pony's feet never touch the ground. (a)
He loves gliding up and down as the wind ruffles through his hair. (b)
Unbridled joy is a treasure to share; (b)
laughter and giggles everywhere abound. (a)
Painted ponies go round and round. (A) - repeated

- written by starkat

The repeating lines make a rondel sound like a circle — it returns to its beginning, just like a carousel spinning around again.

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